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Most readers are familiar with old adages like, “Don’t judge a book by its cover,” or “Things aren’t always as they seem.” Blake offers his audience a similar message veiled in the text of his poem. He presents a view of human nature which may initially appear pessimistic or disheartening. Humans aren’t innately good, he seems to say. Human nature is not always innocent. Blake, rather, teaches readers to be on their guard when dealing with others, lest they end up like the foe, prostrate on the ground at the base of the tree by the poem’s conclusion.
Blake effectively creates this message by creating a stark contrast between how the speaker of the poem outwardly presents and their internal motivations. Blake uses various words with inherent, positive connotations to convey the illusion of friendship and kindness the speaker is showing to his nemesis. “Sunned” and “smiles” in Line 7, “soft” in Line 8, “bright” in Line 10, and “shine” in Line 11 are all examples of the welcoming and warm facade the speaker wears. These terms directly contrast with the more sinister, darker intentions the positive terms conceal, such as “wrath” (Lines 2 & 4), “fears” (Line 5), “tears” (Line 6), and “deceitful wiles” (Line 8). Through his speaker, Blake relays an innate distrust of others. Don’t take people at their actions, or blindly believe what they say, for their true self could be lurking just behind an outstretched hand or kind expression.
The opening set of couplets which constitute the first stanza of the poem offer readers two possible scenarios. In the first scenario, the speaker expresses anger toward a friend. However, keeping their emotions in check and regulated, they verbalize their anger, and their “wrath did end” (Line 2). In the second scenario, the speaker is still expressing anger, but towards a different individual and with a different reaction. This time, they are angry at their “foe” (Line 3). However, instead of verbalizing their emotions and communicating how they are feeling to this other individual, the speaker keeps their feelings bottled inside where they grow and mutate into something disastrous. The fact that this didn’t happen after the speaker expresses anger towards their friend is evidence that the death of the foe isn’t simply a result of anger, but rather of anger improperly expressed and handled. Anger doesn’t have to be a negative emotion; it could actually be quite productive. However, when allowed to fester and grow rancid, the “wrath” (Lines 2 & 4) expressed by the speaker morphs into hatred with fatal, murderous intentions.
As discussed in the “Symbols & Motifs” section, the reference to the apple in the poem points to the existence of original sin (in the traditional Christian sense) inside each and every human being. This is apparent not only in the speaker, as they are obviously flawed in allowing anger to get the better of them at the cost of another individual’s demise, but also in the speaker’s enemy. The speaker’s foe displays arguably just as much deception as the speaker does. When the speaker’s anger “bore an apple bright” (Line 10), the foe sees it and covets it because he “knew that it was [the speaker’s]” (Line 12), rather than for the fruit itself. Envious of what the speaker has, the foe “into my garden stole” (Line 13) in order to claim the coveted fruit for himself. If the speaker is flawed with wrath, the foe is flawed with covetousness. The fault cannot rest only on the shoulders of the speaker, for the foe may not have died if he didn’t trespass into the speaker’s “garden” (Line 13). Both individuals are to blame. Blake again gives readers a rather pessimistic view of humanity with the message: All humans harbor innate vices within them. What’s worse is that humans tend to let their vices get the better of them and dictate their actions.
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By William Blake