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âThe surface digi-cam at the northwest quadrant of the settlement has been destroyed. The pole supporting it was knocked over as well. It is my conclusion that this was done deliberately by a hostile actor.â
Saiâs secure message to Earth command introduces the story and seemingly foreshadows an important plot pointâthe broken digi-camâwhich turns out to be a Red Herring. This creates suspense about a potential conflict and sets up a mystery to be solved later in the story. However, it is eventually revealed that the camera was accidentally broken by children playing. This reframes the opening as a misleading cue, and plays into the motif of Prejudice.
âThe trip to Mars was the hardest thing theyâd ever experienced. Thatâs what the grown-ups said. The small, cramped ship. The constant fear of something going wrong. The knowledge that they could never return to Earth.â
Bell emphasizes the difficulty of the settlersâ trip to their new home. This echoes Holmâs goal to connect her story to her family history. She highlights the human aspect of immigration stories by focusing on everyday life rather than their historical dimension. This furthers characterization by showing the hardships and sacrifices that the settlers made to get to Mars.
âFootball was an Earth game where you threw around a ball and knocked into people. I didnât really understand it.â
This quote is one of many examples that illustrate Bellâs innocent point of view throughout the story. Bell is confused by a lot of Earth concepts and traditions, which serves to characterize him as a naive protagonist and enhances the alien setting of Mars. His distorted perspective on football, for example, assumes that the reader is familiar with the sport and creates humor through misunderstanding.
âThe interior walls were constructed from a space-tech gray rubber that curved gently, flowing from one room to the next like a smile. The rooms were round, almost bubble-like, for improved structural integrity. Sai told me heâd thrown out the old rules when he designed the settlement. Apparently, on Earth, people lived in boxy structures with hard corners. Earth sounded sharp to me.â
This description of the settlersâ habitat establishes the setting of the story. In her Authorâs Note, Holm states that many elements in her story are grounded in science, which infuses this science fiction narrative with verisimilitude. Additionally, this quote contrasts the older settlersâ knowledge of Earth customs and Bellâs innocence, as his only frame of reference is Mars.
âIt was probably a rover from one of the other countries. It was always a little scary to think how close the other settlements were to us. I sometimes wondered what they looked like, as Iâd never seen them. We werenât allowed to go past the little cemetery on the edge of our territory; it was far too dangerous.â
Bellâs reflection explores the motif of Prejudice by showing how little he knows about the world outside of his settlement. What he does know are partial or distorted facts that only make him fear the unknown and therefore create suspense. Bellâs curiosity foreshadows his eventual exploration of the other settlements.
âSETTLEMENT RULES
Do not go outside without a buddy.
Use the alarm bell in an emergency.
Keep a glow stick in your pocket.
Rovers are off-limits for children.
Do not go beyond the flag.
No contact with foreign countries, ever.â
This list of rules highlights the dangers of life on Mars and serves several narrative purposes. First, it creates suspense by introducing potential dangers and conflicts the characters may have to face. Secondly, it foreshadows the specific events that will take place in the story, such as the children stealing the rover and Bell needing glow sticks in the train tunnel. Finally, it sets up rigid rules that some characters later interpret in more creative ways. In Chapter 18, for instance, Bell sees that Trey is afraid of going to the other settlements by himself, so he volunteers to go with his friend. To avoid embarrassing Trey, Bell cleverly cites the rule that states that one cannot go without a âbuddy.â
âWhen the Mars Settlement Mission was announced, Sai said he received over ten thousand applications. But when it came time to choose the crew, he threw out the rĂ©sumĂ©s and went looking himself. He said heâd needed people who were problem solvers. People who were used to messy work in difficult conditions. Like plumbers and electricians and farmers. Sai said that was who kept a settlement running.â
This passage characterizes Sai as a practical leader who cares about creating a healthy and organized community. It also highlights the fact that the settlers are ordinary people with useful capabilities, rather than merely scientists and astronauts. This echoes Holmâs intention to focus on the daily life of this âsmall, family farm versionâ of a Mars settlement (252).
ââThereâs that old lion,â Phinneus said, observing Leo. [...]â
âWhatâs a lion?â
âItâs a very large cat,â he explained.
â[...] So why do you call Leo that?â I asked. âHeâs not very big.â
âItâs his attitude. He acts like a lion. Heâs fearless.â
This is the first time that the symbol of Lions is introduced in the story. Phinneus compares Leo to a lion because of his attitude, which later prompts Bell to compare his friends to Earth animals (Chapter 8). This develops the young boyâs love for lions, which then becomes a recurring symbol throughout the book, concluding with Bellâs statement that the settlers are âthe pride of Marsâ (251).
âI didnât know what I was going to do for her this year. It was a few months away, so I had some time to come up with something. But it was hard because I didnât have a talent like everyone else.
Flossy could sew, and Albie made music. Trey could make just about anything with the 3D modeler. And Vera, for all her snark, could draw soulful kittens and sweet butterflies. But me? I wasnât good at anything. Iâd probably end up painting another rock.â
In this passage, Bell reflects on his lack of defining talent, which he contrasts with his friendsâ abilities. Bell struggles to find his place in the group. This is echoed in Chapter 23, when Bell briefly wonders whether ping-pong might be his âgiftâ (191). However, by the end of the story, Bell has found his place and does not define himself by his abilities, but rather by what he is able to do for his community.
âI used to be Treyâs person.
We were famousâTrey and I. The story went that when he saw me, he immediately claimed me as his âBell-Bell.â Trey would climb into my crib and entertain me with toys and books, even nap with me. We were inseparable.
I was a late talker, which worried everyone until Meems realized Trey was my voice. Whenever I wanted something, he just got it for me. I didnât need to speak, because I had Trey.â
This passage delves into Trey and Bellâs background, which is only hinted at until this point in the story. Bell has been lamenting that he and his best friend have grown apart after being âinseparable.â This conflict precludes their eventual reconciliation and is later echoed in Chapter 21 (see Important Quote #20).
âOne of our crew members, a woman named Lissa, had died near the French settlement. I was a little unclear on what had happened because none of the grown-ups liked to talk about it. She was buried in the cemetery with the cats.â
This quote introduces a key plot point. Although little information is given at this point in the story, the mention of Lissaâs tragedy creates suspense about the potential dangers of living on Mars and foreshadows the significance of Lissaâs death. Bellâs point of view underlines the adultsâ secrecy and buried feelings about the event, which can be tied to the motif of PrejudiceâBell knows nothing but the wrong information provided to him.
âGood boring was predictableâlike doing chores at the same time every day. It was no fun, but you knew what was expected. Bad boring was being bored and having absolutely no idea what was going to happen. Not knowing was scaryâscarier than aliens or even French people.â
Bellâs comparison of âgood boringâ and âbad boringâ highlights a significant aspect of his character. At the beginning of the story, his comfortable routine makes him feel safe whereas the unknown scares him. His equation of aliens with French people reveals that, to him, they are both fantastical, abstract threats.
âBut the lions were my favorite. How could I not love the big cats? They were social and lived in a group called a pride. They helped each other and raised their cubs communally. They sounded just like us. All our grown-ups had raised us together. One sentence stood out to me: Lions who are rejected by their pride do not survive long.â
âIf a piece of clothing could perfectly describe a person, this sweater was it for Phinneus. It was fuzzy, with fraying threads and two missing buttons. But it was soft and comforting and always made me feel safe. When I was little and had nightmares, Phinneus would tuck that sweater around me and read to me until I fell asleep again.â
Bell uses a metaphor, where something is compared to something else without using âlikeâ or âas,â to describe Phinneus. He compares Phinneus to a cozy sweater, suggesting that Phinneus, like the sweater, is also âsoft and comforting.â Bell describes Phinneusâs influence on him as a father/grandfather figure throughout the years. He highlights the old manâs advanced age (âfrayed threads and two missing buttonsâ), which helps make sense of his death within the narrative.
âHere on Mars our skin colors were varied. From darker than me (Darby) to lighter than me (Vera) to just about like me (Sai).â
This briefly touches on the American settlersâ physical appearance and racial background. It is the only instance in the book where charactersâ skin colors are described. Bell points out that Earth movies mostly depict white people, which implies that he has some awareness of the concept of race/ethnicity.
âThe Nanny Program was an international project to encourage young people to settle on Mars. They could be scientists or engineers or cooks or plumbers or a dozen other things. They just had to have some talent that was useful in a settlement. The catch was that each person, or ânanny,â had to bring an orphaned baby and take care of it on the journey. Babies did surprisingly well in space. Once on Mars, the nanny dropped the baby off at the host country settlement, then went on to their own country.â
This passage explains how Bell and the other children were brought to Mars. It clarifies the dynamic between the settlers, who are not related but raise the children communally. Bell does not seem to know what mothers and fathers are, but he evidently views the adults as parental figures.
ââDo you think we should have saved two mice?â I asked him. âWonât Muffin get lonely without a friend? HeâI mean sheâdoesnât have anyone to play with.â
Kind of like me these days.
âAh, I see,â [Phinneus] said, and gave me a knowing look. âWeâll just have to give her a lot of love and attention, then, right?â
âRight,â I said.
We watched Muffin scratch at the edges of the walls of the habitat as if trying to get out.
âPoor thing wants her freedom,â Phinneus observed.
âBut itâs not safe outside for her,â I said.
He gave me a long look.
âI suppose,â he said. âBut living in a cage is no kind of life, even for a mouse.ââ
This conversation between Bell and Phinneus reveals Phinneusâs view on community and cooperation. Phinneus uses the mouse, Muffin, to indirectly tell Bell that he is aware that he and Trey have fallen out, and that their settlement cannot thrive on its own. This portrays Phinneus as a shrewd, caring mentor to Bell, who does not understand the old manâs underlying meaning yet. The passage foreshadows Bellâs later realization that they need to cooperate with the other settlements to survive.
âWhile the mouse disease didnât affect us kids, the grown-ups didnât have any resistance to it.
But the worst part was knowing that it wasnât aliens or the other countries that had brought danger to our home: it was something from Earth. What if other threats were lurking in the supplies? Was it even safe to eat the food? Had one of the killer weeds Phinneus had told me about hopped a ride, too? It was terrifying to consider.â
Bell is maturing as he starts to reflect on what heâs been taught about the dangers of the world. For the first time, he is not facing a hypothetical external threat like âaliens or French people,â but a concrete, seemingly innocuous threat. These lines foreshadow his future introspection about other hidden threats within the settlement, such as resentment and prejudice.
âThen I sat and logged in to Saiâs account. I scrolled through Saiâs messages with Earth Command. Once I started reading, I couldnât stop. He worried about everythingâfrom Treyâs pimples to the strength of the outside coating of the COR. He ended almost every message with the same phrase: Please advise.
Command always responded the same way: weâll send whatever you need on the next supply ship. At first, it struck me as a little cold, but then I realized it was all they could do. They were too far away to actually help. Like the sun in my bedroom, it was all an illusion. The truth was that we were on our own. And we always had been.â
This passage illustrates Bellâs realization that the settlement is completely isolated. The contrast between Saiâs messages and the responses he receives from Earth command characterizes Sai as caring and devoted to his work while revealing that nobody can really help the settlers. This leads Bell and his friends to realize that they need to contact the other settlements and cooperate in order to survive. Bell uses a simileâcomparing something to something else using âlikeâ or asââto show how far away command is: âLike the sun in my bedroom, it was all an illusion.â
âI clutched the glow sticks, fear dancing up my back. âI donât know if I can do this,â I confessed.
âJust pretend the tunnel is the corridor outside our bedroom, and it wonât be scary,â Trey said. âBe brave, Bell-Bell!â
And just like that, something was right again. Even though our world was falling apart, Trey was still my best friend. He would literally sit in the dark for me.
But instead of his doing everything for me, like when I was little, it was my turn to do something for him. I had to be our voice now and get help."
Trey and Bellâs relationship, which had been on the mend in the past few chapters, is now entirely repaired. Treyâs use of Bellâs nickname as a baby (âBell-Bellâ) harks back to their shared history. Treyâs sacrifice (âHe would literally sit in the dark for meâ) and Bell taking charge to help his friend (âit was my turn to do something for himâ) reveal their respective growth.
âIt turned out all those horror digi-reels got it wrong. The scariest thing in the world wasnât a monster or an alien chasing you. It wasnât killer slime mold or zombie plague. It was being alone.â
This passage echoes Bellâs realization that real threats are often invisible and insidious (see Quote #18). Bell now rejects fantasized fears (âmonsterâ or âalienâ): He understands The Importance of Community for survival.
âAmĂ©lie introduced me to all the other kids, and I was surprised to learn that they were all from different countriesâFrance, Russia, China, Finland.
âDo you do this a lot?â I asked.
âPlay Ping-Pong?â Wei asked.
I struggled to explain.
âI meant get together with the other countries.â
Bell grapples with the idea that the other settlements have achieved the sense of community which he is beginning to understand is vital for survival. Bell âstruggling to explainâ shows that he has not fully put that feeling into words yet, but foreshadows his later reflections on friendship and cooperation.
ââBell,â Sai said, âTrey told me what happened on the train. It was very, very brave of you to walk through the tunnel by yourself to get help.â
But he was wrong. I hadnât been brave.
âI almost gave up. I was scared the whole time,â I confessed.
His eyes met mine, and he nodded.
âThatâs what bravery feels like,â he said.â
This conversation between Bell and Sai introduces bravery as the willingness to face oneâs fears, rather than simply achieving a result. Bell expresses his fear several times throughout the book, and is often able to confront those fears in order to help his friends. Saiâs remark validates his effort and provides important characterization: Bell is compassionate and someone willing to confront his fear to help others.
âI wanted to run away, too. Because I finally understood how Muffin must have felt. This settlementâmy homeâdidnât feel so cozy anymore. I felt trapped. Like a mouse in a cage.â
Bell uses a simile, comparing his sense of confinement to being âlike a mouse in a cage.â This echoes Quote #17, where Phinneus implied that the settlement may feel like a cage because itâs so closed-off. Bell now realizes what the old man meant, which reveals his emotional growth. A few pages earlier, Bell claims that, thanks to their new friends, âour world [is] so much bigger nowâ (213), adding to the idea of community as a metric for happiness.
ââSomething doesnât need to be big to have an impact,â [Sai] said, and smiled. âKind of like you.ââ
This summarizes Bellâs role in reconciling the settlements. Sai compares him to the meteorite that crashed at the very beginning of the story. Although the meteorite is a red herring, it provides a metaphor to describe the protagonistâs significant impact.
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By Jennifer L. Holm